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pomegranatejuic ([info]pomegranatejuic) wrote,
@ 2004-04-22 00:20:00

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Top Notch poems written here
My poor life
I'm so jaded
I live in a black pool
It is really sad
Slit my wrists
Please save me
Oozing blood
Die o die
Woe is me

My heart cries tears of blood
And I am rolling in a cesspool of sadness
Gliding on a cloud of hell's smoke


-by Samuel J. Stousehnhaus

*Just a treat for all you who love good poetry*


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(Anonymous)
2004-04-22 12:27 (link)
that is really moving. the first time i read it, i stopped halfway through to catch my breath. the second time i read it i cried. it inspired me to write this:

o lord
o my aching pain
of life
o my body
writhing in angst
o save me, world!
rescue me from your
nestled thorns
o! hark!
~Moose.

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[info]pomegranatejuic
2004-04-22 12:32 (link)
Moose! You are truly truly talented. Perhaps a very important person will read it and contact you about your wonderful work. I hope that you will dedicate your first book to me! I'm truly proud that I was fortunate enought to inspire such writing. If you want to check out more of my writing- read the back of your prescription bottles. I write prescription labels. Here is one dedicated to you:
Take two times daily. Always swallow with warm milk and wheat grass supplement.
Consult your doctor if you notice any redness or swelling on the earlobes.
-SJS

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